I Strongly believe smoking should be banned ,I hope you will agree with me after you read this text.
Smoking should be banned,because its life threatening.It nearly harms all your organs in your body and you can get many diseases like lung cancer,heart diseases and strokes.You harm people around you too.
My second argument is it costs too much money.People are spending too much money buying something that damages their health.The Government prices them up but people don't care they act like smokings good for them,and it's better than more important stuff in life like their family.
My third reason is smoking is addictive.when you have one you want more and more.Its like lollies.If you have a packet of lollies,when you have one you want more.Except smoking is way worse than a packet of lollies.
Overall I am sure you agree with me,because smoking is very bad for your health,costs a lot of money and it's addictive.
By Chloe
Friday, August 18, 2017
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Great job Chloe!
ReplyDeleteI like how you have stated great pursuasive arguments and continued with more detail about your main argument.
maybe next time you could try and add more punctuation in your writing.
from hayley :)