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Friday, October 20, 2017

Miss Journee

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                                                      MISS JOURNEE 🍄                                                                                 
                                                Miss journee have a great day
                                               We all miss you come and play.
                                      If you materialize back you will blow my mind
                                                  After all you are very kind.

                                      You've played our schemes and kept a fight
                                         You're a nice person you're very bright.
                                                Watch out the mice might bite
                                                  But your strong like a knight.
 
                                                Ohh effervescent miss journee
                                               You roll around like a dice 🎲
                                                     You are ever so nice,
                                         You're on fire I think you need some ice.

                                                You show the virtues everyday
                                            When I'm wrong you are quite right.
                                                 I'm sad this has a extremity
                                                  I wish this was perpetually.
                                               
                                                  By Chloe
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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousOctober 25, 2017 at 9:57 AM

    Chloe,
    I REALLY liked your quatrain about miss Journee! I liked how you added the emojis! They really made the quatrain pop! It's really good and it's hard to think what you could do better, but maybe you could use a few colours here and there just to attract the eyes of viewers.

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  2. Emily BrianOctober 24, 2018 at 12:12 PM


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