Why we should get a new sports top!!
I strongly believe that the year five to eight pupils at NBC should get a new sports top.I hope you will agree with me after you read this.
My first reason is they are to heavy!The fabric is sixty five percent polyester and thirty five percent cotton.A proper sports top is one hundred percent polyester which have mini craters in them,so all your sweat can come out; and to add extra weight.The NBC sports tops have collars and buttons which will not make you faster,it will make you slower.
Another reason is you can mistake our sports top as a school uniform.It has all the qualities to be a school uniform and its the same fabric as other school’s uniform.If NBC took away the collar,buttons,changed the fabric and made it less broad it will look like a sports top.
That brings us onto the final reason our sports top is too plain!It is blue and has our school logo on it It is boring!It would be cool if NBC spiced it up and made it different!
In conclusion I hope you agree with me for the following reasons;Not a sports fabric,looks like a school uniform and its to plain
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