Hi Chloe i really enjoyed reading you're blog post and you telling us your experience about swimming and next time maybe try to make the writing more clear and easier to read. -Ellie
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Hi Chloe
ReplyDeletei really enjoyed reading you're blog post and you telling us your experience about swimming and next time maybe try to make the writing more clear and easier to read.
-Ellie